jonathanfigaro

I thought the piece was great. There was a lot of beautiful imagery. The butterfly scene caught me off guard but still I was engaged. I figured out what you ...

Alright, so, that was a good start, and I'm interested to see where you're going to go with it. To me, tough, it felt kind of short, and there was ...

I really think this is beautifully written. I loved how you at times managed to rethink an idea, then continue with what you were saying. Example. "For a moment I ...