jolene15

Don't know what to do or what to say, lost everywhere I go and still nothing to say, don't know what direction I should take, or what mistake I made, ...

I really like your poem it really shows emotions and how some people really feel.

I like it but were it says Do not define yourself by me I think instead of by me it might sound better if you use the word not define ...

Nice poem I like it

Its really good. I liked it a lot.

This is really good. I like it.

Its good but can be better but I liked it.

nice

It was Amazing I really liked it.

I liked this poem but this sentence confused me. Once sheathed in opaque affair. I didn't really get it but other then that I like it.

This is really good

That's a really Amazing poem I like it.

I really like this its Amazing.

I really like this poem but it might be better if it was a little longer.

I really like this poem but in this line takes you whole for a joyous ride. I would change joyous ride to joyful and take out the word whole-other then ...