jolene15

I was kinda confused on the poem but its good. I didn't really understand this part-----I am an idiot because if I wasn't, you'd leave. I am coarse because I ...

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Thank you very much

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I loved your intro but Liked it all the dream kinda confused me but i liked it.

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Its a very good poem but might sound a little better if it was longer.I also like how it all works together to become a good some what lost me ...

Its really good I enjoyed reading it. It show emotion and that's was what stood out to me the most good job.

I like it a lot very well put.

thanks I am happy to have people comment. I have more poems feel free to comment on them if you want.

This is amazing and beautiful. I like it a lot and enjoyed reading it.

Its very good I like it and dont see anything wrong with it.

o ok got it now thanks

Well I made it longer and a little better I think so feel free to reread it.

I liked a lot but there was a few spots that i got stuck on...but this part here confused me a little bit more= You break my hands, And with ...