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I really enjoyed reading your poem and Have nothing to say then your a really good writer.

I enjoyed reading this but got stuck on a few things like she never replies at anyone not even to her own children I think what you mean is she ...

Thanks JasperSkye...I just got out of a relationship when I wrote it, and ok lexieells

Thanks everybody but I honestly like it the way it is and was gonna add more to it later on and try to fix it. Lol and ok haley10019 i ...

thanks i will change it now.

Sorry You didn't like it but honestly I do. Thanks for being a huge fan of my work but doesn't everyone make mistakes. Dont worry about being mean and I ...

I like it but in this part =I collapsed to the floor and groaned. I had gained five pounds over the holidays.=I think it might sound better if you take ...

I enjoyed reading it but I do have a few idea how you could make it better. Instead of saying When I hear a country song,One thought comes in my ...

I like it its very good. Well, I don't meant to be rude, But I've not been reviewed. I think it's rather unfair. It's quite a cause to despair. Please, ...

More lost then I am now.

thanks and no I didn't thanks again

I though I loved you, but you hurt me, I tried to love you and, all you gave me was pain, you made me happy for awhile, but messed it ...

This is a very amazing poem but i would change the way you layer it. she stands in front of the mirror She is naked She is scared She is ...

Its very good and right to the point. I like it but I also think it might be better if you add a little more emotion.

It wasn't how I was really just popped into my head when I was listening to music.