jolene15

Ya me could do that rememeberdecember I dont mind

No to be mean I had to read over this a few times before I got what you is kinda confusing to me but other then that I liked it...but ...

I plan on making it longer but first I have to think of what I want to add...but thanks

You're in my heart so strong and steady, like a butterfly in the meadow, or like a cat with a mouse, I have this feeling like I cant get you ...

Im not upset about what you guys are saying but I put it that way so it look like a little kid wrote it and i like it that way

best friends should stick together, forever and forever, even though they don't, if someone says they're, your best friend and, then stabs you in the back and , never talks ...

I like how this is put out and also like how it relates to some people...well at least I know I feel like this sometimes. I think if you add ...

ok thanks but i like it this way im gonna add more to it but that's it

Thanks I will work on it all soon. I'm glad you liked it.

Why can't I tell you how I feel why am I so scared to talk to you why can't everyone just get along why do people have to be judge ...

Something new is about to begin While all that you know will come to an end Wind is rushing through the trees Bringing the scent of old memories Then the ...

I really enjoyed reading this but have a thing I would like to put out there instead of it like this... Have you seen the detective? This case has not ...

I really like it but I think you should add a little more detail and make it a little longer.

There it was—the most beautiful thing a seven-year-old boy could lay eyes on. It was about as big as the nickel resting in his pocket—that is, if said nickel was ...

I enjoyed reading this but now im kinda scared not to be scared,but i like the way its put and set.