jok101

Wow I'm sorry but I suck at grammar but as far as the story goes wow I liked it I thought it was fast paced and had a question that ...

Ahhhhhhh *falls of chair laughing* not really *gives stern look* Sorry but as a brit anything even remotely insulting about are accents just makes me hate the rest of the ...

I really liked your piece it was well written. No grammer mistakes that I can find. Yet I have to complain about one thing. The moral I don't think it's ...

sorry about this review totally out I was new when I posted it it but that isn't really an excuses anyway a hundred sorrys and then another hundred sorrys so ...

I thought this was well good quite funny but maybe have Addie as more of a Bad girl black hair ruined school uniform. lose tie always gum chewing, something like ...

I don't have any critiques bit I have some ideas for names. The Last song, Hand in Hand [because she's holding her son's Hand] ,Ticking by, The Last Countdown. Some ...

I thought the second chapter was good. Even though it had just a few grammar problems the only one I thought really mattered was this one and it isn't really ...