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Short and sweet. That was really nice and flowing. I'm guessing it means you help this person when they're in need. I don't have anything to say, except maybe you ...

ONLY READ THIS IF YOU'VE ALREADY GUESSED THE RIDDLE OR ELSE YOU'RE A CHEATER AND THE RIDDLE'S NOT FUN ANYMORE!!!! So, if you've already guessed, the answer was time. If ...

I love that poem! Lord of the Rings is my favorite series on earth (besides Narnia). There weren't any formating or gramatical errors that I could see. Maybe you could ...

Okay, I got this idea from "The Hobbit". It's a riddle, and you have to guess what the poem's talking about. You can't read the other replies to get ideas. ...

Now that was true prose. Whoever said big words weren't the only thing you needed? Well, they're not, but in your case, that was extriordinary! I agree with the last ...

Very vivid descriptions. I could tell that if I was watching a movie I'd be freaked out. You've definately got a unique writing style - in a good way! There ...

Okay, sorry. I sort of made a few obvious mistakes in my review... Just letting you know I realized that.

That was really well written. Especially the part about the "nearly consumed cookie". Similies always sound good no matter what context their in. I think that's my motto. Anyway, I ...

This is the prologue and a segment of the first chapter of a book. I kind of started it on a whim. And the first part is supposed to be ...

That was a beautiful narrative poem. I could really feel the desperation and confusion that comes from retreating into yourself (if that's what you were portraying). I like how you ...

That was really cute. I love how the story progressed. You know, it reminds me of another poem on the site called "Secret". I forget who it's by. But I ...

I'm probably not the best person to reply to a college essay, but I wanted to say something to this because I thought it was really well done. I've always ...

Dawn was one of Igy’s favorite times of day. Her other favorite time was dusk, because the one thing they both had in common was a fiery sun peeking over ...

This was a great piece of writing. The best part was how perfectly you described the feeling. I could imagine everything. There were a few grammatical and formating errors like ...

Wow, Talulahbelle (if I spelled that right). I really loved that story! I want to hear more! I'll tell you what made it so great. October is such a unique ...