johnny2x4

I did not find any of this funny, maybe it's not in the area of my sence of humor or maybe it was because it lacked description and dephth (despite ...

Reminds me of a Beatles song. I liked it for the most part. The ending four lines could of not sounded so cheap if you made them work with the ...

Good. You describe things well in the body paragraphs. The way the pauses of the story line seem to bounce like a song really held me as I read along. ...

I felt that it dragged on after you told your story. I mean all that information after the main story was ended was needed, but I felt that it could ...

Wow i really liked this piece, i felt it to be very funny most of all. The end really got me, i have never really read anything about convicts before. ...

Over all it is a good essay. You make some very profound points and come at some angles that I wouldn't have thought to. Your grammer is rather poor, but ...

I found this piece to be very simple and clear. I had no trouble trying to figure out what you were trying to portray. It runs on sometimes, but then ...