johnny2x4

In the back woods of my mind, it still feels like it was just yesterday when we were still friends. If...you can call what we had "friendship" that is. Now, ...

I did not find any of this funny, maybe it's not in the area of my sence of humor or maybe it was because it lacked description and dephth (despite ...

Dream on you weary child, eclispe the sun rise in your heart. Buzz and play in the meadow fields, forget the sorrow of being apart. Leave behind those green hills, ...

Reminds me of a Beatles song. I liked it for the most part. The ending four lines could of not sounded so cheap if you made them work with the ...

Good. You describe things well in the body paragraphs. The way the pauses of the story line seem to bounce like a song really held me as I read along. ...

I asume now more then ever I held an opurtunity of chance to give my night something of worth. The music in the room swelled to a fine point finding ...

I felt that it dragged on after you told your story. I mean all that information after the main story was ended was needed, but I felt that it could ...

Wow i really liked this piece, i felt it to be very funny most of all. The end really got me, i have never really read anything about convicts before. ...

Over all it is a good essay. You make some very profound points and come at some angles that I wouldn't have thought to. Your grammer is rather poor, but ...

If you were to see me the night before this morning, all depending on the exact time really but anytime over all. You would see me sitting in my drive ...

I found this piece to be very simple and clear. I had no trouble trying to figure out what you were trying to portray. It runs on sometimes, but then ...

i really enjoed this work, i found it to be very clear and simple. I got what you were trying to portray.

"Lord, let them know that you are king, let them know that you can and will rein in their lives. Lord Jesus you are the only way for these lost ...

Hello everyone, So how is everything? What's going on out there? What's the rest of world doing? Anthing exciting, hopefull or dreadfull? I am interested to know. It's a comforting ...