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jmcllarky

  • Dramatic Poetry Re: To Live is to Die

    overall i enjoyed the peom but i think it needs some work. Sorry to say but thats what i think. I love it man keep up the good work. oh ...

    Oct 20, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: tears

    umm Aj i think you might have to go see a Doc. because when you say tears of blood i think you might have something wrong with you. lol jk ...

    Oct 20, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: the mystery caller

    I think you need a LITTLE more detail but overall, i like the story idea and i think you should make it a little longer. But over all i liked ...

    Oct 20, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Only the Message Mattered

    Hahahahaha love it. (i am laghuing cuz i have perverted mind.) lol hahahahahahahahaha

    Oct 20, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Course of Human Events: Chapter 2

    Love it keep up the good work

    Oct 20, 2010
  • Scripts Re: Zombie Play [Working Title] Part 1

    Wow im an small Actor and i have to say LOVE IT! i would do it myself. lol Keep up the good work

    Oct 20, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Forgetting (Edited)

    Love your story! I can conect to it. lol haha

    Oct 20, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Nightmare

    Did this take place on ELM Street??

    Oct 19, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Im Going To Hell

    Thanx i wrote this at my Gradnfathers house to give him nightmares!! Hahaha

    Oct 19, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Im Going To Hell

    1970 was the year when Jeffrey Simpson was born. His father wasn't there to witness the birth. He died in a horrible car accident. As the years went on Jeffrey ...

    Oct 19, 2010


Perfect kindness acts without thinking of kindness.
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