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Re: Heartbroken
I really enjoyed this. You managed to present a scene that was easy to understand and feel. Just beautiful, I loved it. There are just a few things that I ...
Jul 2, 2011 -
Re: The End
Thanks, and I see what your saying about the "Sadly"... I'll think of something to fix that with. Other than that it's really an expression of how I feel about ...
Jul 2, 2011 -
Re: The End
Stuck in this skin, yet still content. People staring, but woefully misjudging. Tattoos cover my body, recognition of my sorrow, Sadly it's time to let go... I sit on the ...
Jul 2, 2011 -
Re: The way she makes me feel.
Leaning in slowly, careful not to smear her make-up, I gently place my lips upon hers, becoming lost in time. Unaware of all around me, I am placed in a ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: Hi!
Well my favorite all time book has to be "Where the red fern grows", It's an epic love story between a boy and his two dogs. Absolutely an amazing book. ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: Hi!
I actually have a really good poem that I wrote a while back. I have to wait until Monday to post it though, I'm on the wrong computer. I'm still ...
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: Eyes of a Stranger- Part Two
Yea, I think I have to agree with Dudette completely, my mind would be racing. Also, you might be able to add in why she chose Trevor over Sam. For ...
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: Eyes of a Stranger- Part One
Yes, this was one of the few stories that I've actually read while being with this site and I have to say, I'm very impressed. Your flow and transitions from ...
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: Hi!
Well hello everyone! I just wanted to start off by letting everyone know I'm new here and I cant wait to start. I've never been apart of a forum based ...
Jun 24, 2011
