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Re: Dream do come true.
i really liked the story.... the description in the first paragraph was interesting which made me to look forward to the story.... This is a super interesting story. The description ...
Jul 2, 2011 -
Re: Yoho...Yoho...A Pirates Life for Me
nice. i really enjoyed reading it... Tarnished boots clanked the deck in rapid pace. really appreciate the way you started off the scene your descriptions are great. the flow of ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: Dear Lucy: Chapter One
i loved the story. the flow of words was great. i couldn't find any faults in it. some things i really liked were 1# the beginning was amazing. loved the ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: Letter from my father
Interesting story, definitely unique! the flow is really good. coming to some details now... 1# try to elaborate the first paragraph. go for some more detail like- she's lonely today, ...
Jun 28, 2011