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Re: deleted
nice theme........keep trying
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: Anime girl
i am a huge fan of anime......they are very attractive and adorable......your drawing is good....try searching in Google for anime sketches and practice them well......keep trying
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: Luna
i liked the poem .........its elegiac, profound......i guess you have wrote it with full of feelings ........but the lyrical flow broke towards the end.........the end could be a little better........
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: Dear Maria
i like the story...i love the flow......you have beautiful choice of words....ya , its true i felt like reading a letter......but try cutting out short paragraphs.
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: I watched my mother
very touching................heartbreaking, poignant story.....i loved the would be more beautiful if you can make the story a little more longer
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: Endangered world and our future
“There is a sufficiency in the world for man's need but not for man's greed.” ~Mohandas Karamchand Gandhi. Endangered, threat. Yes, this is what our planet is facing now. It ...
Jun 23, 2011
