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jinx

  • Dramatic Poetry Re: deleted

    nice theme........keep trying

    Jun 24, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Anime girl

    i am a huge fan of anime......they are very attractive and adorable......your drawing is good....try searching in Google for anime sketches and practice them well......keep trying

    Jun 24, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Luna

    i liked the poem .........its elegiac, profound......i guess you have wrote it with full of feelings ........but the lyrical flow broke towards the end.........the end could be a little better........

    Jun 24, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Dear Maria

    i like the story...i love the flow......you have beautiful choice of words....ya , its true i felt like reading a letter......but try cutting out short paragraphs.

    Jun 24, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: I watched my mother

    very touching................heartbreaking, poignant story.....i loved the would be more beautiful if you can make the story a little more longer

    Jun 24, 2011
  • General Articles Re: Endangered world and our future

    “There is a sufficiency in the world for man's need but not for man's greed.” ~Mohandas Karamchand Gandhi. Endangered, threat. Yes, this is what our planet is facing now. It ...

    Jun 23, 2011


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