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Re: Dream do come true.
i really liked the story.... the description in the first paragraph was interesting which made me to look forward to the story.... This is a super interesting story. The description ...
Jul 2, 2011 -
Re: The Town of Wolves (chapt. 7)
Interesting story, definately unique! Nice description in the starting paragraph, it drew me in, so I wanted to read more. i loved the depth of the story.
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: Subject
i loved the plot. i really loved the originality and the choice of words. the flow to words was really good. keep up the good work
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: Yoho...Yoho...A Pirates Life for Me
nice. i really enjoyed reading it... Tarnished boots clanked the deck in rapid pace. really appreciate the way you started off the scene your descriptions are great. the flow of ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: My Life - chapter 1
June in India is blistering, ominous month. Long and damp days. Nights are roofed with sluggishness and surly anticipation. Rivers shrink and black crows overindulge on matured litchi still in ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: OBSIDIAN: A Tale of Africa
i really enjoyed reading the story. ....................the flow of words was really good. nice choice of words................i would definitely be waiting for more of it....... keep up the good work
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Dear Lucy: Chapter One
i loved the story. the flow of words was great. i couldn't find any faults in it. some things i really liked were 1# the beginning was amazing. loved the ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: Letter from my father
Interesting story, definitely unique! the flow is really good. coming to some details now... 1# try to elaborate the first paragraph. go for some more detail like- she's lonely today, ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: Dance
i am a great fan of dancers because i love to dance.... nice poem.... i really liked it........... you captured the emotions well........
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: Meh...
i am a huge fan of cartoon sketchers...... i really liked the sketches........ they were good.........especially the last one... keep up the good work...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: I Jumped
i loved it....... the flow of words was amazing...... the love was rightly captured in words......
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: Lost In Mortality
i loved the story...... you have captured the emotions well.... i love the flow of writing....... i would definitely like to read more of it......
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: Most Recent (:
lovely..... i am lacking words to describe your pictures........... i loved the first picture the most..... way to go keep up the good work
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: Vision And Veracity
It’s cold out here. Shivering cold. I can hear my teeth chattering, talking nineteen to the dozen. Miles and miles of snow. The sky is dark. The only thing I ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: Dancers
i loved the poem.........i love the flow........the passion of the dancers is well put into words
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