jimss23

Sorry it took so long for me to reply. Same characters different story line. I am working with three versions now. See which one I like more

I would love to read it. I feel like my reviews will be better the more context I have so I for sure look it over and give ya my ...

No problem. Let me know if you need any help with anything! Looking forward to reading more!

Ah! Ok, that makes a lot more sense. I will admit, I was a hardcore atheist for a long time. Questions like these are really hard to debate from a ...

Hi! Thanks for the review! A quick question. I am assuming, based on the tone of your review, that you do not agree. Can you tell me why? What specific ...

There is a giant gallery of paranormal creatures to choose from other than werewolves. I would say explore a little and see. If you don't find one you like, you ...

That is good! Everyone starts somewhere! What I meant by "weak points" is that every character needs flaws. The more powerful the main hero is, the more glaring his/her fault ...

I forgot to say. GOOD LUCK WRITING MY FRIEND!

Yea that's what I meant. I think it would help.

jimss here Thanks for the review. I really appreciate the time and detail you put in the review! Will eventually use this to make revisions. Cheers, Jimss

Hey yea sorry about all the ignorant stuff. Happens to me a lot. Sorry. Remember, I am not too bright, so I tend to like having things explicitly stated (or ...

Yea, I completely changed the plot! Your advice really helped Thanks for the tips! Cheers Jimss

Jimss here, Don't mean to be a pest, but I just revised this. Had to change the character bios a bit, but I think it is for the better. If ...

Thank you very much As you may have been able to tell, I am very bad at writing emotional scenes. I've been trying to improve, so this advice really helps. ...

AWW thanks :D glad to help!