jimishine

It's not meant to be funny Snoink :D There is significance in everything; feces are not strictly a comic device. Lilymoore, I know how cliche seasons are but it's from ...

"I think, I would sit in a bakery, release one and wait for my enemies to comment on the wondrous smell in the air. I, however, will know they are ...

A local field. Cold all year round. Early mourning ground. Dog takes man out. Scrapes dormant weed. Yet the seed stays on it's coat. "BARK BARK" Dog Barks (Who is ...

Incredible story...strange really. I have witnessed such a metamorphosis myself a few times, and it is a travesty when beautiful girls are ruined by hammering drugs. But we must remember ...

I see great potential for a beautiful song in what you have written :) The staggered structure mirrors the forlorn theme wonderfully. As I read I could not help but ...

Well, it is bound to be so isn't it? The problem is (from a Briton's perspective) is that the average American Christian is so staunch in his beliefs that he ...

thank you very much for your comments, I left this poem on the board a while ago and I'm very glad it has been read :)

Another piece of yesterday is gone A good looking face in an old photograph but life marches on. Talk about nothing else for at least a week. Some people joke ...

The seasons alter our behaviour From when were seeds until when we are sprung, But golden leaves still fall out of favour, They drift on the wind and die in ...

I think this piece is great. ...lady shaped like me/Withering at the other side of the fountain An isolated moment in time where the speaker witnesses a metamorphosis. until she ...

A lovely piece of art! Honest and unashamedly personal. The back and forth nature of your work, the pretence and the reality, to me evokes the thoughts of a mind ...

I've joined the Young Writers Society! By the looks of the site, the internet is proving to be a successful vehicle for poetry. However, I can't help but feel that ...