jillygirl

Hey! This is a poem on the Pain of Loving Someone...Please Review! It desperately needs it! I’m not sure what to think… Confusing I wish I knew what this meant ...

This is one of my first attempts at could use LOTS of work...please review! The boy who messed around with me, instead of solving equations. Who chirped like a fire ...

Hey there! First off, let me say...I LOVED this poem. It is simple, but I really enjoyed reading it. There were only a couple things that I found wrong with ...

Hey there! Here to review your poem... Let me just say, I really liked this poem. It has sort of a dark, brooding quality that I find really appealing. However, ...

Hey! Great job on the poem...I loved it! This poem is totally relatable, and it is very well-written. The only things I would change have already been mentioned...over all I ...

We both said we always wanted to be friends But I knew, deep down, I could never see you as anything But a traitor You said you loved me As ...

Okay little sis---here we go. I liked this poem, but I think it lacks a bit of imagination. Sorry...I love you...but true. It is really good, but slightly bland. Here ...