jesusfreak97

Thank you guys so much for your feedback. I do feel I need to work on the end a bit more!! Thanks for the great suggestions!!

The moonlight beats down onto the vibrant waves of the seemingly endless horizon. The lapping of each wave as it crashes into each jagged rock makes you feel in awe ...

I like this a lot because of the way it expresses your feelings. I can relate to how hard it can be sometimes to be a Christian and always follow ...

I love the way you describe what you believe in. I like it so much because I believe a lot of the same things that you express throughout the writing. ...