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'Cut' Silence. Slip down onto the cool linoleum Hear the drip of the faucet Raspy breaths in your throat Notice your heart beat quicken Feel the blood coarse through your ...

I like it. Its nice, simple, and everyone can relate to it. I especially like the lists that you have, they add a lot of emotion.

The title of the poem got my attention, and the imagery kept it. I loved the line about hearts cut on coke cans. It's beautiful, you are an amazing poet.