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I don't think this is rough at all! It's done the trick of making me want to read more so well done. I think Already Gone sounds a lot better ...

Camping! So much fun to spend the summer watching the sun & having a good time with friends =)

Extremely edited so I hope this is better =) I’ve got to thank SimplyPersnikety for giving me a lot of help. Well I was thinking of using this later on ...

This is great. The fact that Peter actually broke up & upset Violet shows he's human and you've showed he's not perfect which is fantastic. I think it's good that ...

Only now i started reading your stories and i've got to say they're all amazing. I love the way their the oppositwe to each other - very fairytale. I loved ...

Heyy :) Thought I'd just leave my opinion. All in all I thought this story was interesting, I'm looking forward to reading what happens at the park so good work ...

This was really great. I think you should carry on with this story, you've got me hooked already :). Well done. Not much of a review I know and I ...

Well since a lot of people have reviewd I'm not going to repeat what they've already said =). But I really enjoyed it you should definitely write more. I loved ...

I've edited this a lot now but I'm still not sure. I also need a suggestion for the title. An I know this is short but I'm still finishing it ...

I think this is a really good poem about a true friendship but maybe you should state the differences between a friend and a true friend just to make it ...

Hmm I don't really know what to say because this was really good!But Ive got to do two reviews so here it goes lol. You described alcohol perfectly where it ...

This is incredible. Really different for Cinderella and really good and enjoyable. The descriptions were great too. Great job =)

I was so difficult to pick one but i love the idea of creating my own world where anything could happen because it's all up to me =) x