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Thank you so much :) After getting a bad comment it's nice to see someone who liked it :D I shall let you know when I add more :D

Thank you :) Yeah I'm sorry there's not much I'm just trying to get into the first chapter, as soon as it's up I promise to PM you :)

Okay so I haven't wrote anything for ages and now I'm really feeling the need to get something down. I'm going to need all the help I can get, so ...

Thanks Yuri. :) Yeah this is quite rough as it was just something I was feeling at the time so I just wrote. But I will improve it. I'll develop ...

Wow thank you both so much. I thought I would have had some harsh stuff. I agree with yuo butterflyflutterby2 I do need to develop it a little and I ...

Okay fistly my title is the first one that came into my mind. This was just something I wrote on the spur of the moment on the way I'm feeling ...

I really enjoyed this and really liked the flash back idea. The first one I thought was really sweet. Can't wait to read more. :)

I really enjoyed this! It's so unique and fun to read. I can't wait to read more :) x

Yeah, I know that I'm the writer but it's harder having guidelines to stick to when you're used to writing what comes to your mind. Obviously I'm going to write ...

Hey guys well because I know you're all awesome writers on here I thought maybe you could give me a tad of help? Well for my English course I have ...

Hey :) So I won't do any nitpicks as it seems the other guys got you covered there :) but I love this, I really do and I think if ...

I think I would have liked this a lot more if it was more like a story, at the moment it's just like a script, you don't have any descriptions ...

Thank you, yeah I'd been trying to get this idea down for a while and that part just basically seemed to write itself so I'll be adding to it soon ...

Well this is something I've been trying to get down on paper for a while now so I don't really know what everyone will think of it. It's kind of ...

I definitely know what you mean by something just hitting you. It happened to me the other day but I got so frustrated because I couldn't put it into words ...