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I liked it even though i've never heard of this before I understood everthing that was going on but there were some mistakes you spelt some of the names diffrent ...

Name:Colista Gender:Female Age:22 Race:Human Appearance:She stands average height and is slender,she let her alburn hair fall to her back she have unusual green eyes that change to diffrenet shades of

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We took down the deer with little energy I move in to eat but stepped back when a black she wolf let out a growl I waited until she had ...

Name: Diana Fae Age: 16 Gender:Female Rank:Hero Super hero/Super villan parents:Diana's mom is a superhero with the power to move things with her mind and read peoples thought.Her dad is ...

Diana - 16 I watch a pack of wolves decended on the elk,maybe they will let me join their pack if i help them on their hunt I thought. I ...

Name:Diana Fae Age:16 Race:Fairy Fairies/Elves:Fairies Power: She has a strong bond with animals.can control fire and can do magic{cast spell,curses.est] Personality:She is even tempered and fun to be

I like it seems like its going to be a good story but i would like to know what clans he,s from that would have been somthing to tell when ...

I liked it cant wait to see more..

Yea i think they are right animals have a good sense of smell he would have been following his scent from the begin and it could be more descriptive but ...

Chapter 1 Foxstar sniffed the air. She caught the scent of the other clans, she signaled for her clan to join the others the Thunderclan cats ran down the slope ...