jessie2009

Please tell me what you think. -------------------------------------------------------------------------- I've been told that, quite a lot, but I never thought I was perfect. Just because I was a mode

I really like it! Hope you write more. You have some spelling mistakes. And some punctuation missing. But i still LOVE it. hope you write more=]... --Jessie

I really like it. But you have alot of punctuation errors. And you also sometimes use the wrong letter. But im tired and i really dont want to sound to ...

Hi. I really like your story. just found a couple of mistakes. “Sorry, hold on a moment” she said to the tall white man. He nodded. She grabbed her Rumor ...

I liked it. I thought it was really good. Are you writing more? The only thing that I would do is make your paragraphs shorter. The seem really long on ...

Is this suppose to be a poem? Like I don't understand it. Can you help me understand it, Abbi.? Like what does it mean? Well, I hope you can tell ...

I really like your story. I think you should write more.=] I didn't see any mistakes, but I suckk at that.... aha. But I want to read more. I hope ...

I love it!! But I would like to know more details about the girl, and her name. But this is great, I think you should write more and post it, ...

See I like twilight, but I LOVED this. I don't get why people are saying take some of the swearing out, if you didn't have the swearing then it wouldn't ...

Wow. I really like it. You didn't give to much detail. You spaced it out. I didn't find any mistakes while I was reading this, but I'm not the best ...

I agree with the others, Lucas seems older than eleven. And did April's mother died before? Because why would she move with her brother. Thats the only thing i don't ...

i really liked it! You had so many details, I knew the scenery. And I don't think you should change it! But if you want to change it and do ...

Oh my! I thought Luke was going to die! That was such a good story. Is there any more parts? I would love to read more. You are a excellent ...

Wow! I loved it! You had so many details that were perfect for it! I could picture it perfect. That was so sweet that Luke was going to rescue the ...

Abbi- I really liked it. This poem reminds me of my family. You write really good. I never noticed that you did before. But this time i actually read your ...