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Re: A Bit Too Late
I really liked it. I think you should write more. But that is always your option. [quote="Caitlin Crowder"]"How could you not have known my feelings for you?" I demanded of ...
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Re: Imminent Past
I really liked that. I liked how you kept the "tragic accident" in till almost the very end! A good idea. I loved your writing. Very good! Are you writing ...
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Re: Abuse
Wow! That was a really good story! Every thing flowed perfectly together=]. I didn't see any mistakes. Your a good writer. I was wondering do you have any more stories? ...
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Re: Of pictures and places (updated 10-3-09)
Wow! Those were all so pretty! I loved the one with the flies on the daisy. I thought that was the prettiest picture=] I also like the black and white ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: brothers.
1)[i]This is my brother Junior, aka Jew. He is two years old, and the date on that photo is totally wrong is was July 27, 2009. Just a week and ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: ...And to the woods, to Grandmothers house we go...
The church sign is so cute! I love it. I like how its angled. And the picnic table i love too! I don't know why i like those two so ...
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Re: Palm Tree.
Hi. I just moved to florida and this was the first time I saw a plam tree in real life. =]....
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: Holly's Photography
Holly- You take really great pictures! I love all of them, but my favorite is the rotting apples' one. That one is so pretty. Is that one in your back ...
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Re: Let Me Love You(11)
Wow. I really love this chapter
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: Sisterly Love
I saw nothing wrong with your dialogue.But I loved your story. I was just wondering, are you writing more? I hope you are, I want to find out about James ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: 'Til Summer Comes Around Chapters Four and Five
I really like this story! I hope your writing more. There was nothing wrong. i like your writing style. --Jessie.
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Re: I Promise But I Lie (2)
This was a tad confusing. But I still like it!! Well hope you write more. --Jessie.
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: Let Me Love You(10)
I love it! I hope you are writing more. I didn't fond any mistakes but hey i stink at that.. I want to know if she is pregnant or not. ...
Aug 3, 2009 -
Re: First Chapter of My Novel... Care to see if it sounds right?
Omigod
Aug 3, 2009 -
Re: Mrs Jones - Chapter 7
I love this story. Are you writing more? I hope you are. Well, bye.. Jessiee.
Aug 3, 2009
