jessie2009

Chapter 4. My eyes widen supprised to hear that, "What do you mean?" I started biting my nails that are already to short. My mom always told me that I ...

No problem! One chapter out of a book always has to be boring and slow... Even in the best books. I think I will like the next chapter! I was ...

Wow. That was good. I like the other chapters a lot better though... This one seemed boring, kinda. But I still like it. I was WAY wrong about E and ...

Okay. So this just it a true story.. I just changed names.. I always wonder.. So please tell me what you think.. Try to help me make it better. --------------------------------------------------------

Summer Romance! I am just going to show you some mistakes. Then I will tell you what I think=] Every girl dreams about having a summer romance once in their ...

Yeah. I agree with every one up there. I'm thirteen and I could never see my self doing that. But this was AMAZING! Well, gotta go! You write really good. ...

Wow. That was really good. And I hope you write more. I would do a longer review, but I am off to school. Uh! But bye. Hope you write more.. ...

That was nice. There's one thing that confused me though. In Chapter 15 (I think, not quite sure) it said she was 6 months pregnant. But in this chapter it ...

I like it. It's like really cool. You don't normally see things like this. I think you should keep it but add more description. Like explain a little in the ...

Wow! The part about her cuts gave me chills. You're details were good. A lot better than mine=]. Well I see you have posted Chapter 2.5 so I am going ...

That was nice. Every one else got all the grammars problems.

[b] Okay, so as you know Jessica's best friend died. I am just kind of waiting for some more chapters then I am going to be getting to the point ...

I like it. The characters are nice. I liked how you waited to describe Jenny. Abigail is quite interesting, too. I get the feeling she's been in this and is ...

Chapter two. Please review. Any thing! Good OR bad!!! Any title ideas? My alarm clock wakes me up the next morning. I roll to my side and look at the ...

I feel like Connor doesn't want to admit he's gay. But I guess that's just how I feel towards it. I loved how you made Justin as a character. He ...