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Re: Safety Poem
In the small town that I live in, a young boy died a few years ago. His parents made it a mission to teach our town about safety. So every ...
Jul 30, 2011 -
Re: Goodbye
You did a fanstatic job on this! I liked how you can just feel all the emotion in the poem. It has a lot of feeling in it, which I ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: I'd Cry (An "I'd Lie" by Taylor Swift Parody) *contest entry
When I read the title I thought it was going to be about an ex-boyfriend, but instead it was about friends! It makes me think it was like saying bye ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: The Best Book Ever Read
A really good series is Stephanie Plum! It's be Janet Evanoich. I think there is seventeen books. There about a bounty hunter names Stephanie Plum! I think I've read, like, ...
May 30, 2010 -
Re: To you, Holly Magin
Hello! So we are making poetry journals, and this poem is to my older cousin. I would like you guys to review.. I don't care if you shred the whole ...
May 29, 2010 -
Re: Four Little Words: Prologue
I really liked this piece. Hopefully you'll post the rest soon=]. I think every one else got all the mistakes. Well, Keep writing --Jess.
Jan 10, 2010 -
Re: love
That's fine. It's a good piece. Well, yeah no problem.
Dec 26, 2009 -
Re: I don't know what to name this.
My name is Jessica Marie _ _ _ _ _. That is how many letters my last name is.. I was born on March 12, 1997 (yes, i know my ...
Dec 26, 2009 -
Re: love
Is this suppose to be a short story? Or is it suppose to be a prologue and you can say like five years later and maybe they met again, but ...
Dec 26, 2009 -
Re: Forever part 2
Hi! How are you? Thamks for emailing me about the story!! I see everyone in dark shade of colors; blue, black, purple, brown. Alright, this sentence put me off. I ...
Dec 25, 2009 -
Re: How to Live - Chapter Four
I've been reading your story since chapter one. But I never got to do a review because I was on my phone. Really I don't have anything to tell you ...
Dec 21, 2009 -
Re: Forever
I was just wondering if this is a short story or if you are going to continue it on? It would be a good long story. What I didn't understand ...
Dec 19, 2009 -
Re: DELETED
Hi! How are you? I loved this story! Your title interested me, so I decided I would read it. I don't think I've ever read a story of yours. For ...
Dec 19, 2009 -
Re: The YWS 2009 Yearbook
I love YWS! Well, I joined in July.. I kind of stopped writing in the month of September, because I was moving once again. Then I stopped writing in December. ...
Dec 19, 2009 -
Re: Whenever Forever Will Be - Chapter One (Part 1)
Hi AmberJane. I really like your piece here. I hope you continue writing. I will look forward into reading your next chapter. I was getting confused though. Is the main ...
Nov 25, 2009
