jessicarabbit

This was a very interesting story. You know that today is the day when all the freaks come in, you don't know why, nor do you care, all you know ...

I really enjoyed this. :) For some reason, it reminds me of The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Nighttime, even though that was about a boy with autism. ...

I have to agree with the previous review. At first when you mentioned a monster, I thought maybe it was Godzilla or something, but it sounds more like a bomb ...

I have to agree with angels-symphony. There are a few too many adjectives. The reader can get a bit lost. It had started to rain and I realised the fire ...

This was interesting! I definitely found it hard to turn away from and I wanted to know what happened. The mysterious woman is a very interesting character, both dangerous and ...

Wow, that was awesome! I really liked it. One small thing... I dashed for the dark space under the big wood thing next to the other big thing my prison ...

I read The Fountainhead a few months ago and had mixed feelings about it. I loved the plot. It kept me reading until the end and I found my self ...

Wow, that was great, very eloquent :D I personally find it very difficult to use profanity in my writing (although i still do it :) ), I found that you ...

Wow, that was really good! Your descriptions are excellent. Even the darkness is crystal clear to me! :lol: Your voice is so smooth and everything flows so nicely. Ok, now ...

well, i don't read many war stories, but i'll try to be helpful. I really like the rhythm of your writing. It is abrupt and to-the-point and doesn't delay the ...

ok, this is my first time reviewing anyone's work, so i hope I do a good job. I love the way your words flow. It's so smooth throughout the story,but ...