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your little newt nemesis fellow, i found quite amusing along with the rest of the poem...i don't know why though, i guess it was very whimsical. but i have to ...

this was good. really good. i can honestly say i can imagine my mom singing this for me at the kitchen table. it made me ROFL. and the rythmn made ...

i like it. alot! it's hard to find this kind of "struggle in love" poem in these forums. its basic, straight to the point and heartfelt. i can totally relate ...

yes, i have to agree with mad, on that the last line was a bit random...but random isn't bad it leaks out a smile to the reader. the poem all ...

i actually like questions in poems...this made me feel like i was really in the writers head wondering all this, but the repetition of the magic eight was a bit ...