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Re: Johnny Boy Ain't Too Smart
This is good...definitely agree it could be a song, by The Clash or something,ha. But yeah I like it, I don't agree that you should think about changing it. Subject ...
Jun 22, 2008 -
Re: These Words
I quite like it actually, definitely isn't bad. I reckon short poems are the best kind, getting too over the top with imagery can get well boring sometimes, so this ...
Jun 22, 2008 -
Re: Worthless..?
This is really good, dark but good. I agree with whoever called it emo.....but as emo is short for emotional then it can be considered a compliment. It IS emotional, ...
Jun 22, 2008 -
Re: Untitled
It's coming to an end With my boy and me, I'm leaving town So it's best that I'm free, Yet for months I've had planned If anyone's hurt, not me, ...
Jun 22, 2008