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Re: Captive (Part I)
Chapter 3 Matthias came in to check on the boy the next morning. Tristan was lying on his right side on the bed, head on the pillow, eyes open, dark ...
Oct 3, 2010 -
Re: Captive (Part I)
I edited the post to include just the first two chapters because I think the length of the original post was a little intimidating to readers. Thanks in advance to ...
Sep 28, 2010 -
Re: Captive (Part I)
Hey, thanks for the review! I did want to split the chapters into multiple posts (one chapter per post), but as I understand it, you have to have 100 points ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Captive (Part I)
Thanks for your feedback! There's nothing better than a detailed review that offers constructive criticism. I do realize the first chapter is practically crawling with historical inaccuracies, and I d
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: Captive (Part I)
Summary: In the cold, isolated forests of 16th-century Europe, a lord takes a boy prisoner. As an unexpectedly tender relationship develops between captor and captive, resentment and distrust grow int
Sep 24, 2010
