jennyr

Hey! You're so nice for doing this. Could you take a look at my novella? I'd greatly appreciate feedback. The first chapter is a little choppy, flow-wise, but after that ...

Hey! You're so nice for doing this. Could you take a look at my novella? I'd greatly appreciate feedback. The first chapter is a little choppy, flow-wise, but after that ...

Hey! You're so nice for doing this. Could you take a look at my novella? I'd greatly appreciate feedback. The first chapter is a little choppy, flow-wise, but after that ...

Hey! You're so nice for doing this. Could you take a look at my novel? I'd greatly appreciate feedback. The first chapter is a little choppy, flow-wise, but after that ...

Hey! You're so nice for doing this. :) Could you take a look at my novel? I'd greatly appreciate feedback. I have the spelling, grammar, and other mechanics down, so ...

Well, you sort of threw me off because I thought that maybe Matthias WAS the father but he was hiding after they'd tried to kill him. Or something *sighs* Not ...

ah ha! But what IF his father hadn't been murdered? Then there would be no story. I guess it's a good thing then, right? :) You should seriously reach out ...

Orion gasped as he perched on the edge of the pond and glanced at his reflection only to be confronted by a stranger. Good first line. We all know how ...

Summary: In the cold, isolated forests of 16th-century Europe, a lord takes a boy prisoner. As an unexpectedly tender relationship develops between captor and captive, resentment and distrust grow int

The conversation between the doctor and Matthias was really good. You did a great job using the words of another character to provoke Matthias's reactions. I am getting a very ...

Chapter 6 Matthias wished he had never met the boy. It would have been easier. Maybe he could have killed him at the beginning, before he knew anything about him, ...

Thanks for the awesome review! Your feedback was helpful--I agree that I could do more showing and less telling. Sometimes I don't feel like writing specific parts of the unfolding ...

Thank you for the instructions! I think I figured it out.

Summary: In the cold, isolated forests of 16th-century Europe, a lord takes a boy prisoner. As an unexpectedly tender relationship develops between captor and captive, resentment and distrust grow int

Does anyone know how to add chapters to a novel? Because I've clicked on the 'Edit Novel' button many times, but I don't ever see how to input more text/add ...