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Tristan slowly regained consciousness. He woke lying in bed, surrounded by darkness. His body ached and he was disoriented. He wasn’t sure where he was or how much time had ...

This was beautifully written, of course, but I have to wonder how old Eden is because the fact that they're spooning . . . I found awkward. Eren is 14. ...

Chapter 3 Haakon watched the boy, standing with his back to him, dry himself off and then wrap the sodden blanket around his thin body. He was shivering and he ...

A/N: There are fairly graphic descriptions of violence (at least imagined violence) in this chapter. However, the violence is not included simply to be gratuitous. It’s used to show the ...

Summary: After he is wounded in battle and left to die alone, Eren appeals to the enemy for help. Haakon has no pity for the abandoned boy, but takes him ...

It surprised Matthias that he was sweating on such a cold day. He could see a blood stain down the left side of his shirt. Matthias was surprised he chose ...

Summary: In the cold, isolated forests of medieval Europe, Matthias takes a young nobleman named Tristan prisoner. As an unexpectedly tender relationship develops between captor and captive, resentmen

Thanks for your thoughts; receiving feedback is awesome! Though Matthias's intentions for Tristan are purposefully a little ambiguous/disconcerting in the first chapter, don't worry--he's not the type

Hey guys. I completely re-did Chapter 1, and I think it's significantly improved--it flows better and there's more characterization, conflict, and plot details. It is longer than my first version, ...

Summary: In the cold, isolated forests of medieval Europe, a lord takes a boy prisoner. As an unexpectedly tender relationship develops between captor and captive, resentment and distrust grow into ...

Hey, thanks so much for the review! It was helpful to me. I'm hearing some of the same suggestions, so obviously I need to change a few things. I recognize ...

Thanks for the feedback! I'm working on re-doing the first chapter. I think it's the weakest by far of all my chapters. Though I want to keep the mystery, I'll ...

Idraxx and Jennyr - I have every intention of doing both of your novels but please be patient for them as I will read them all, take notes and then ...

You put it under romance. I'm sorry, but it's one of the things I won't review. It's not one of my favorite genres, so I won't read anything that's focused ...

Yes, it's under Romantic Novels. Here's the link to the first part: topic69839.html