jennydragonlover

personally, I think that this story is veerrrrry good. Your details are very vivid. Are you considering publishing after you've finished?

How do I "break this up?" Thanks for the comment!

I love gryphons. In fact, I'm working on a book that features gryphons and eastern dragons. Have you been to Neopets? Check it out. I've got an adorable Eyrie. If ...

If you like fantasy and dragons, you should read my latest post: Second Excerpt from Dragonquest. Sorry, if it doesn't make much sense, but just give me your opinion on ...

After arriving in the strangest land that any person with imagination can conjure up, Simon, and his new, strange friends fly on the backs of threer dragons towards Darwin’s Dragon ...

this was very interesting reading

I found this story very enjoyable to read. Next time, could you separate your story into paragraphs? That makes it a lot easier to read. I had fun reading yours ...

Hmm... this is a very good beginning for a story. I wish that I could write an engaging lead like that. You should check out my post.....it's fairly interesting.

Thanks Misty Lynn, I'll read one of your topics one day.

This story must be really awful if no one has bothered to say anything about it. I'm really sorry if it's that bad.

The World's First Ostrich Chirp was small. No, he was tiny, a midget. No he was practically microscopic! He hated being small. He wished he would have a sudden growth ...