jenni321

ok, now I feel loserish...good job though! I will catch up, eventually..... You earn a gold star (or several, for that matter)

8/10, love that cartoon! the words are kinda blurry, than again, i don't exactly have x-ray vision...

This is an re-do, I cut out a few stanzas, Lynn and Vernon: you guys were right, it kind of dragged. Is this an improvement? Shelf Life Tired of living ...

Seeing that I have 4 other siblings, I never really get to talk about myself, so this'll be fun! Ok, um, since I love making lists..... I'm 14 (Yes, I'm ...

Oh, I got a good, or should I say, really bad one: Write a creative essay about your hair, how does it reflect your personality? uh, it's blonde, and it's ...

Jenni walks nervously in, amid the stares and whispers from the regulars, "Who's the new girl?" She goes hesitantly to the bar, "A small Sprite, please?"

ooh, 10/10, i luv it! so pretty!

8/10, cool, kinda deep. mines pretty random, true though... :D

Aquiline nose, big eyes, whitish blonde hair? (or maybe balding...) :D

Banned for liking horses (deathly afraid of horses) :D

This is my first time publishing a story on YWS, so I had to get over my nerves. If I want to get published young, I have to learn to ...

I seem to like to write about truth, it plays such an important role in my life, but that's a story for another day....Well, here's my latest poem, it's kind ...

ooh, that was good. like the previous posts said, there were a few grammatical traumas. I liked the metaphors, but you're almost on the borderline of too much imagery. i ...

I seem to like making lists, so here's another one about the place I call home: When giving directions, there is no North, South, etc. there's only 'That way!' You ...

I thought it was good, but I agree that there could have been more imagery. some words or phrases (brown hair, etc.) could have used more descriptive words instead. Otherwise, ...