jenni321

I'd be confused. Who writes the dictionary?

Jenni walks into the Tavern, more confident now that she's been here longer. She waltzes over to the bar and orders a Coke, swivels on her barstool and spills her ...

Gosh, I haven't been on since April! What with exams, SOLs, end of the year projects, and of course, my grandmother (she has cancer, lives with us), I've been really ...

Let me just start off saying: I really did like it, I liked the off sense of rhythm you had going on. It confused me a bit in some parts, ...

Hey! Great poem, I really liked it. There were a few things I noticed though, like when you say: our lives shall come together, new memories to be had. or ...

I've noticed that there are hardly posts about American Idol, and this is probably due to Apathy, or just coincidence. Well, I'm bored, so I'll just write a little 'editorial' ...

I've seen this topic done a lot, kind of lacks originality. I agree with Chevy, u used 'I, me, my' too much. how bout u look this over again? It ...

I really liked this, the use of imagery, and the shortness. I seem to like short poems, they just seem to say more, how ironic. you definitly did so, even ...

Well, I liked it! it was total Mr. Brightside (like someone said earlier.) the beginning was kind of teetering on the edge, but it finished up quite nicely at the ...

It's teetering on the edge of sloppy! careful! interesting topic, i've never been one for politics. maybe u should edit it more!

I agree, it sounds kind of preteenish. u're aiming for adult! unless, u really are aiming for kids. JEnni

I really liked the imagery, love the use of metaphors and such. hmm, well, i have no critiscm! great job! JEnni

I actually wrote this after my Algebra Exam, it was more instinct than concentration. I really like it, but it needs something. A Little Murmur In the back of our ...

I agree with Eimear, I think you should drop the rhyme. the rhyming seems kind of forced and limiting. You could do a lot with this without rhymes, that's why ...

I was sick of asking my friends for feedback of my poems, so I Googled 'Young Writers', i clicked on it, liked it, the rest is history.