jenni321

I thought it was really cute, I liked the theme of it, funny. But...but the rhyme scheme was going all over the place sometimes! First it rhymed, then it didn't, ...

I agree with the above post, the line breaks kind of got a bit iffy with me, and yes, you need to capitalize the start of every line! I really ...

I agree, you need to work on the mechanics of the story, like the grammar and capitization (im horrid at that too, though). I liked the theme of it, but ...

You have a really good idea (I love poems with this kind of moral), but I just don't think you did much with it. This poem should be like a ...

huh, for some reason, specific bible verses popped into my mind...weird. Anyway, I thought it was really good, I liked the rhyme scheme you've got going on, and yes, the ...

Well, it's 11:30 where I am, and still, not sleep. I'm tired to the point of tears right now, but there's this little thing called insomnia that does this everynight. ...

thought i'd bring back a blast from the past....anyone know anymore long words? other than smile? Jenni

Username: uh, 85%, dont know wat it is, but it sounds cool Avatar: 90%, yellow cars are cool like that... Custom: 65%, don't know what that means.. Siggie: 98%, haha, ...

7/10, it's ok, I like the blue-ness of it, :D kinda plain. Jenni

um, short, dark brown hair, thinnish, fairly short, smiles a lot, bubbly. perhaps asian?

It makes me think of a little girl kicking dry leaves around in a city park, probably because that's what I did every lonely October day in the city. Mine's ...

The bad guy in the story. Is actually misunderstood and seeks love and kindness. Had a rough childhood, turns to violence as the first resort. Adeline Jzatelle

Hello, my name is Razzielle Maebell Martino and my mom gave me this stupid name because she was on pot at the time.

Laugh, then cry, then called the fire departement. What would you do if an army of monkeys declared war on the United States?

gigabyte.