jenni321

Not sure what category this goes into, so I'll just stick it in here.. This is my first poem in 3 months, so I'm a bit rusty. All reviews are ...

heheheh, yes, there are actually several marks on my desk from my pen when I got angry... The user below me bites their nails.

Horrified, Jenni jumps up and starts apologizing perfusely to Chirantha while mopping up the cherry syrup. "So sorry, I'm so so SO sorry! Ooh, Nate, sorry 'bout that jacket, it'll ...

Yeah, it was amazing, but me and my brother found some humor in it...Like when the floating 'moon' thing rose from the stadium, it looked like the Deathstar. And then ...

Johnny. Not John, John's too serious. 15 year old Irish girl in the early 20th century. Came to America to find work after her mother, and last surviving relative, dies ...

Huh? Harry Potter? What's that...?

Ok, sure, The Inherintance series is popular and gets kids to read. I applaud that. And yes, I will probably read the last book, and yes, I will probably hate ...

This book was life changing. It seriously changed the way I think. Yeah, at first it was hard to understand, but once I got into it, I couldn't put it ...

Actually, I find what you did good strategy for starters. Write what you feel, like what you just did, pour it all out, don't worry about rhythm or whatnot. *Then* ...

It's a good poem, not fantastic, but hey, that doesn't mean you can't make it fantastic. You told here, didn't show, which is a no-no most of the time in ...

You know what this reminded me of? Nursery rhymes mom would read to me before bed and I would later memorize. And I think that's great. It's really cute and ...

Wow. That's a lot of metaphors. Usually, I'm not a fan of metaphor-loaded poems, but I really liked this. Except in some places it got a bit confusing, couldn't follow ...

I really liked this, simple, to the point, my favorite kind. However, sometimes your rhythm got thrown off, like when you said "Of your hatred it is full. " It ...

Jack Frost? :? I think you mean Robert Frost... :D For me, the most influential poet is Mattie Stepanek (i don't know if I spelled that right). He died a ...

Yellow. I hate it. No, hate isn't a strong enough word...Loath, there we go. I loath the color yellow, it's too bright, obnoxious, flamboyant, annoying, attention seeking, and insanity-inducing. I ...