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Re: Petal Fall -- My first poem
hey! I just joined too, but welcome anyways! your poem is really good. descriptive, and elegant. I can totally picture it in my mind. great job, keep writing!
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: The Gummi Bear Poem
It's random, but in that utterly funny way. It'd be good for a children's book on poetry, too. At last! a poem that isn't like every single other poem!!! Jenni321
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: Music of the planets.
The poem itself is really good, not sure what it's about though... i have it on the tip of my tongue, nope, don't have it. good job, though. Jenni321
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: Epic Poem 1
Great job! it's hard to write long poems like that, but you pulled it off quite well. Tell me when the next part comes out! jenni321
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: Leaped
It's good for your first work. It's kind of confusing in some places, and some places the syllabels are kind of off. But it's a really nice poem. And don't ...
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: Welcome to heaven
It's really good, but there are some lines that have too many syllables, it kinda messes up the beat. but other than that, it's pretty good. Keep writing! jenni321
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: Stupid Jokes.
This one is really old: A person is making muffins. She puts the batter into the little molds and puts them into the oven. It starts to get really hot ...
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: Funny things to think about
Things to think about: If a person with multiple personalties threatens suicide,is that considered a hostage situation? Do they sterilize needles before making a lethal injection? How come 'abbreviate
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: God Knew
God knew that we all needed someone, To show us love and cheer, To show us that all’s not lost, That someone is still near God knew that we needed ...
Dec 22, 2007 -
Re: if you feel a sudden urge to know about me...
aS you can see from my username, my name is Jenni. Not Jenny, not Jennie. and most defiently not Jennifer. After reading the nxt few sentences, you'll probably think I'm ...
Dec 22, 2007 -
Re: yay!! Another Newbie!
hello all! As u can see, i'm new. It took me a while to find the forums,even though there's a big sign 'Community' at the top. yeah, sad right? Just ...
Dec 22, 2007
