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Re: Blurring Chromatics.
It's been a while since I've posted, even though there hasn't been a day in weeks where I didn't write something...Reviews are loved and needed! Please and Thank you! Blurring ...
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: Choke
Very nice, I like it. Powerful, Emotional, I could feel 'choking' at the end. The holocaust is always a hard topic to write about, it's hard to capture something so ...
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: Thought
Wow, thanks guys! I only had about 10 minutes to write this, so I guess I should give myself a time limit more often! And yeah, I'm always forgetting that ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: Thought
I wrote this poem at an art camp, it was an interesting prompt: describe your thought process. And we had 10 minutes to write it, so it turned out kind ...
Jul 29, 2009 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [3]
8/10, don't really get it, but it sounds nice
Jun 26, 2009 -
Re: Untitled
I always seem to submit my poems into this category, cause I never know where they belong...This is something I wrote after my grandparents died, just kind of letting emotions ...
Jun 15, 2009 -
Re: my curse
Hey, welcome to YWS! remember to review some stuff before you post, or you'll have the YWS ninjas after you... anyway... It's good, I think I understand what you're trying ...
Jun 15, 2009 -
Re: Invisible
Hmmm, honestly, the topic has been explored quite a bit already, but I'm always open to variations. I have to agree that the repetition of 'Why, Why Why' ruins the ...
Mar 29, 2009 -
Re: To Love
I always seem to put my poetry in here, cause none of my stuff ever really fits...I wrote this after my Journalism Semester Exam, so I'm starting to see a ...
Jan 23, 2009 -
Re: The One Who Has Hope
uh, thanks..I guess. haha, that's an interesting comment...
Dec 21, 2008 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
Ok, I know this sounds weird, but if I hear of a book thats really bad, sometimes I go out and buy it so I can take my red-pen to ...
Dec 12, 2008 -
Re: Young Love
Yeah, you know, after I reread it a few dozen times, I get what you need. I was letting off some steam...Thanks for being honest though! This will go in ...
Dec 12, 2008 -
Re: My Rant About How Stephenie Meyer Annoys Me
This was hilarious! And I must say, I totally agree with you. For me personally, The Twilight books are kind of over-rated. In the tiniest way, it almost reminded me ...
Dec 12, 2008 -
Re: The One Who Has Hope
Not too sure what this falls under...actually, I never see to know what my poems fall under... They're all pretty out there. (and yes, the title is kind of based ...
Dec 12, 2008 -
Re: How?
I liked this, simple, not flogged down with too many words (I hate it when people do that). I really liked how there was no real rule to the rhyme ...
Nov 9, 2008
