jenfisher

i really enjoyed this- especially the repetition at the end. i really like your style of writing, and your descriptions were detailed so I pictured the restaurant and characters, but ...

:D really enjoyable, not too long, not too short. I liked the represntation of a typical suburbian mom, with her only worries being of her repuation! nicely done :)

I enjoyed this- I liked the idea of the grandfather as the storyteller and also the boy without a name, and the repetition you used- clever. I can't see anything ...