jenfisher

i really enjoyed this- especially the repetition at the end. i really like your style of writing, and your descriptions were detailed so I pictured the restaurant and characters, but ...

:D really enjoyable, not too long, not too short. I liked the represntation of a typical suburbian mom, with her only worries being of her repuation! nicely done :)

I enjoyed this- I liked the idea of the grandfather as the storyteller and also the boy without a name, and the repetition you used- clever. I can't see anything ...

Looking at the clock on the wall, she realised how quickly the day had come and gone. Pushing one of her strands of wavy fair hair behind her ears, her ...