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  • Poetry » Humor, General
    Re: .

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    Hey there! Honestly, I personally love poems about animals, particularly cats. I will say I do like the repetition you use by using "she" instead of switching back and forth ...

    Sep 19, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: Nicolette Chapter one

    Hiya, I'm Jessica. I'm just stopping by for a friendly critique! Let's get to it then. So there isn't a clear setting in this. There is nothing saying where these ...

    Feb 23, 2018

  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative
    Re: Gypsy Girl

    Hiya, I'm Jessica. This is an interesting tale you have here. I have a few critiques so I'll just get into it. - You don't seem to have a general ...

    Feb 23, 2018

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative
    Re: war for love...? (maybe)

    Awwww, well hiya! Honestly, I can see this comes from a really deep place and I think this is beautiful. I am bisexual so I know how it is to ...

    Feb 22, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Eyes Of Death: Chapter 1

    Hiya! This seems like a very interesting novel. I do have a tiny thing. This chapter seems to jump around a bit. You had the little boy with his parents ...

    Jan 25, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic
    Re: Lyrical Chapter One: "Smile"- Mikky Ekko

    HELLO! I think that this will be an awesome novel. I would like to say that it seems a bit vague. You don't really emphasize on the feelings this boy/man ...

    Jan 24, 2018

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: If Only

    Hiya! This poem is a very interesting piece and I would just like to say a couple of things about it if I could. :) I can see that it ...

    Jan 23, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy
    Re: Chapter 12 of Princess of the Sea

    Hiya! I think this is an awesome piece of work you have here, and I see it's a whole story. Personally, I love mostly anything related to the sea (The ...

    Jan 22, 2018

  • Poetry » Culture, General
    Re: Of What Should I Have Wrote

    Welcome to YWS! This is a great first post and I love the style of it. I like the way you post the questions, because many readers can answer them ...

    Jan 22, 2018

  • Other » Realistic, Other
    Re: Feelings

    Well hello! I just want to start with the fact I dealt with a thing almost identical to this. I think making this speech available to people is fantastic. It ...

    Jan 22, 2018

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Dearest Cassandra

    Ello! I like this poem a lot, because it's interesting. To me this is simple, but it's also something that makes you want to read it, it's ...desirable. Personally, I ...

    Jan 12, 2018

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: When The Quiet Girl Stands Up

    Hello! I have a short review that I hopes help a bit. This piece, I can tell comes from a deep place and maybe is even something you have felt ...

    Jan 11, 2018

  • Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction
    Re: Blake And Emma

    Hiya! I can tell this is a romance piece, and it is interesting. On the side of how it flows as a story, I think it is kinda choppy. You ...

    Jan 11, 2018


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