jemjive

This story amazes me! I read it over twice. Can you like PM me and tell me when or if you write more of this?

This is great!! I found myself singing (badly :lol: ) in my head instead of just reading it which is a good thing you want lyrics to be like that ...

This poem is very well written, I loved the stanza and how it rhymed. It is all tied together and there are no stray though. Absolutely positively beautiful.

I see you, my heart races, Skips a beautiful beat. Every time you smile at me, I hear it, hear it thump within my chest. How do you do it? ...

What's going on? You really don't know? You seem to be out of it. I thought you would know What's going on? They say this, They say that. They shun ...

It flows nicely and has a great emotional lace. I like it.

This is beautiful. I too have had that thought that Cinderella's deeds were of the evil sort. If you have ever read the original Cinderella not the Disney one, you ...