jemjive

Oh and by the way my favorite part, I feel sorry for you. I feel sorry for my best friend, the one that you chose over me. Because while you ...

I can't believe how exactly this fits to my life right now! Dead serious, sounds just like what I just went through a mere two weeks ago! It's a rough ...

Hi, I'm jemjive and will be your reveiwer. I will say that I throughly enjoyed reading this poem. It flows very nicely other than maybe the first verse, it sounds ...

Oh and also, you are supposed to write it lines. Its grammatically correct. New paragraph every speaker. It is also double spaced.

I admit, yes childish, haha. It was an assignment, we had to write a childrens story with quotations. As for the flashy words, we had to. We were not allowed ...

This is a story I wrote for a school assignment and really liked, the puctuation and even some spelling might not be great, I'm no wiz at that. Hahaha. Suggestions ...

Hi I'm jemjive and I suppose I will be your reviewer haha. This poem fits the category perfectly, dramatic. It is deep and has feeling. It is not just a ...

This is part of "The Llama Song" minus the last line :S

I'm jemjive and I guess I am your first reviewer... I really liked this poem, suicide is a subject that is so touchy that I think it takes a lot ...

Every verse is in a haiku format, I am open to ANY suggestions. :) Anyone reveiwing now, ignore the reviews I already have. They are old and I have fixed ...

I really like this poem, it is written about a writer. A great point of view! I only suggest you try to put it into lines instead of the paragraph, ...

Haileyanniful, it doesn't rhyme, where are you talking about?

I was sort of thinking about that, putting what the scar was and what did to "make me stronger", no way to describe it was coming to me. Maybe looking ...

Hi, I`m jemjive I will be reviewing your poem. I suppose your word choice is pretty good, but your poem has no organization. There are two lines that rhyme and ...

Every verse is in a haiku format, I just wrote this last night and feel like there is something missing. I am open to ANY suggestions. :) All you are ...