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Wooooow. That is really all I can say. I am not really someone who is good at reviewing the punctuation or format but wording I can to. Your poem is ...

LOGAN Tarrion turned to me, still holding the gun, "Get everybody inside the tent and make Annie lay down. This is something I have to settle on my own," he ...

FORLO Elinia peered into the forest, "Something isn't right." she mumbled. I knew exactly what she meant, I couldn't place what it was, something just felt... wrong. There was an ...

Hey Adna! Here you go. :smt003

Do you know the feeling? The prickling pressure, Right on the tip of your tongue. It's a roaring beast, pawing to get out. But you can't let it go, It ...

This isn't really a review I guess I just wanted to say that I liked this poem and it reminded me of the poem in 10 Things I Hate about ...

"I'm hungry. Where did Luvia go with that basket?" She said. She kissed me on the cheek and went off to find her berries. "General?" said a voice. I looked ...

She is lost in the shadows, They swallow her whole, Pulling her deeper. She reaches out for you, but you're no longer there. Hidden by the darkness, Kept from the ...

Thanks guys! Snoink, for "Would you care to share it with me?' I am trying to imply that I have a secret and am wanting to share it because I ...

Do you know the feeling? The prickling pressure, Right on the tip of you tongue. Its a roaring beast, pawing to get out. But you can't let it go, It ...

Eeek why is everyone dissing the shoes? I thought it was kind of cute because they are his shoes :P

GEMMA I sat down on a nearby log, "I'm ready." I said. Matt sighed, "Okay here it goes..." "Matt wait," I interuppted, "Don't feel crazy for thinking that you know ...

FORLO extreme case of writer's block, attempting to break it. Caution: may suck. :wink: Everything was packed, besides the remains of burned out fires, there would be no trace of ...

Thanks Glad! About the egg one, it actually is a rock and I purposely put my hands shadow there, I though it would look cool. And on #10 I thought ...

Also, I have put up some other ones that I think are better than these.