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Dramatic poetry review please? It would be lovely. :)

Want to review a fellow Paramore fans work? Please :)

So here's something I posted and I am eagerly awaiting a review.... Please :)

So here's something I posted and I am eagerly awaiting a review.... Please :)

So here's something I posted and I am eagerly awaiting a review.... Please :)

Hey there Isaac! This poem has alot of potential in my opinion. I just think that the puctuation needs alot of work. The periods you have added at the end ...

It's the Christmas season, it's supposed to be full of joy and smiles. The green scent of evergreen trees and the sound of carols are supposed to fill our days. ...

I can see each passing second. The long black hands are pointing fingers, hardly giving you the time of day as they systematically make their rounds. I can hear each ...

I can see each passing second. The long black hands are pointing fingers, hardly giving you the time of day as they systematically make their rounds. I can hear each ...

This is so predictable, and this is so cliché. But you need to know that you make me feel this way. I’m slowly going crazy, your sweet talking is making ...

Thankyou all! This means alot. :)

I built you a dock to hold your boat of love. The storm was looming, but I dove right in from the shore and worked from the water. I carefully ...

Thankyou all! I will work on it with your ideas.

I have emotions escaping me, like a leaky faucet. Drip; sorrow. Drip; bitterness. Drip; regret. Cold tears fall from the faucet until hot water is turned on, full blast. The ...

GEMMA - medic tent "Gemma..." croaked Ryder, "I'm sorry." The look in his eyes brought tears to my eyes once again. In the past 24 I had lost touch with ...