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Sight Fails We're so wrapped up in our existence Forgetting that which is important What matters the most in our life We quickly cast aside Chorus Our sight is failing, ...

Peace and quiet That's the way I like it I sit at home and read a book or watch the birds flying about No one is home I'm filled with ...

Listen man, don't listen to what she said (her above me.) Sometimes, like with this poem, you're writing for your own benifit, and not really for others to relate to. ...

1. A Man Called Blessed 2. The Hobbit 3. The Long Partol 4. Homecoming 5. And Then There Was None 6. The Felowship of the Ring 7. A Horse and ...

Intro Why can't we see the light? Why can we not reach out? The time for change is near. verse 1 We're so wrapped up in our existance We forget ...

Huh...Thats funny. I really liked this and it was fine to me Pie Pie. But remember, just because someone gives you a suggestion doesn't mean you have to take it. ...

I looked at the sunset, All purple and red. I thought out loud, "The painter I must meet! For the artist uses colors or every tint and shade, to paint ...

Sorry I don't have alot of time to see what has been done. I didn't realise there was a second page. I'm just going to not write in this story ...

Alright I'll join in Blackwings. Name- Lykoto (lie-ko-toe) Gender-male race- Rosno (looks kind of like beast from X-men exept with a tail and one horn in the middle of their ...

Well, I don't know about you, but i "Hop," "skip," and "Reverse". Literally and figuratively. I sit down and begin writing. I'll write for a while and then stop. The ...

I think you need to change a few things. "Waiting...waiting...fo...for...the words come," should probably be changed to, Waiting...waiting...for...for...the words come," "clicking¾now" I believe you

I enjoyed this as well. But I personally think the stanzas need to be broken apat. Making a total of four stanzas. The first one could be broken up after ...

This was kinda confusing. Make sure all of your tenses are correct. Good effort though. Keep writing and you'll go far. Jearjioe

I just read Sniock's amazing grace and a thought came to my mind. If you like amazing grace, or think it's over rated, listen to the drop kick murphies rendition ...

This is crazy good! I've been feeling just like that for a while now. This pretty much sums up alot of things about life. I think it's so annoying how ...