jcloud14

Hunger, hunger everywhere, the whole world is in despair. Because even though the smell of food fills the air, there is not even a bite to spare. or Hunger, hunger ...

This is really good, I could never think of it. I loved the part where you said "With parents outraged, and friends in a daze, the young couple disappeared into ...

Cool poem, very creative and original. Interesting subject that readers can relate to.

Hi, I know this poem is silly and stuff, but I just wan't you to know it's for fun my poems are usually better than this. What to write, what ...

Good job, very funny. I liked the last 2 lines IDK why though, I gues it's just appeals to me somehow. I wrote something about the same subject. The I ...

I liked it it was very creative, much better than any of my poems. I don't really agree with Galerius but I guess we all have are own oppinions. I ...

Good job. It made me so sad. Is this all in past tense are was it supposed to be like a story (present tense). It was getting a little confusing. ...

Good job it is very interesting. I do have to agree a little with moonglowe though on the next chapter you need to take your time, I mean it's not ...

I'm not going to give you the whole chapter until i'm totally finished with the book. Instead i'm just going to give you two paragraphs from random parts of the ...

PS: Sorry but I do also have to agree with the others. It's enteresting and good when it comes to rhyming and it's good for something you had to do. ...

You are very talented, good job.

I just wrote these 2 poems please tell me what you think. 1. Hunger, hunger everywhere, the whole world is in despair. Because even though the the smells of food ...