jcipriano1

As to the reason of its extreme fast pace, I wrote this story, intending at first to have it be like the main character telling someone a story. If he ...

For not having EVER written poetry, this is really good. It is interesting how it switches between a rambling description into a little story. You should continue working on poetry, ...

What a unique idea to write about! Very fun to read. Keep up these great ideas!

I read this book in one weekend (not too hard to do). It is now one of my top favorite literary works. The characters that steinbeck create are genius! It ...

I'm not sure if it is your style of book or not, 2001 a space odyssey. Some other great books are The war of the worlds, 20,000 leagues under the ...

Possible ideas for where the sand came from...Arrakis! Dune! Ha! =) but seriously it's an extremely inreaguing plot...well...plot teaser. I'm so excited to find out more! Keep writing! Faster!

This sends a great description of how the universe formed and is very symbolic as well (the old man waiting). Messages can be seriously woven into the descriptions with this ...

I apologize for the spacing of the lines, even though I posted it without the spaces, It will not change. Another note...This was a limited paged, limited timed school project. ...

Tell me about it. Poetry can be pretty cruel. Especially sonnets. This is a great, fun poem and really can relate to what others feel. I Look forward to seeing ...

A very dark poem that creates a sorrowful picture in my mind. I admire the end line and the over all tone of this poem. It intreagues me how one ...

It reminds me so much of a Shel Silverstien poem, very smart and witty, fun poems like these bring out the happiness in life...keep up the good work!