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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Dr. George's Final Words(Contest Entry!)

    I find that this type of a story/poem adds a fluidity of brief plot and a mysterious tragedy that forces the reader to truly wonder and ask, "Who is Dr. ...

    Jul 10, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Violin

    I found this to be probably my favorite piece I have read on this web site! It was AMAZING! Seriously! Everything about it got me captivated in the story, I ...

    Apr 17, 2011
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Exosphere

    It is an interesting description of feeling and surroundings. There isn't necessarily a running plot, which is why I say this. I was a little confused. If more was added ...

    Apr 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Jezebel

    Hmm. Get's me realizing that most everything I write, I don't even understand. I give it up to the reader. I am assuming this is something of the same type. ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Government Takeover

    This is very interesting, I assume you are reading 1984, ofcourse. Actually I am planning to read this book after I read Moby-Dick. The only problem I had, was that ...

    Mar 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A Patriot

    This poem certainly expands a large bubble of pride within my heart. I, myself, have written a rather long poem about freedom. The pride I felt when writing that poem ...

    Feb 21, 2011
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Help Wanted

    It is quite a short, unique story that really shows peoples greed with money. It is a little anti climatic, in the sense tha he really knows nothing about the ...

    Feb 9, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Plan in Your Head

    This is a great story! It certainly shows the different perspectives of two characters, making them feel like completely different people. It definately shows how we shouldn't judge others. It ...

    Feb 8, 2011
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: What is the Best Book you have read...

    Without a doubt, my favorite book must be 2001: a space odyssey. If you've seen the movie, you have no idea of what I am talking about. Contrary to the ...

    Feb 8, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Two Shorter Stories

    Haha! Reminds me of Aesop! Though very short, they can have certain dark meanings in them. I can't say which one of the two I like better. They are both ...

    Feb 7, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Detective James Fredrickson

    A very suspensful beginning! Especially the part with the dead bodies and the last sentence. The only sentence that I did not like was "He freaked out". Perhaps another, less ...

    Feb 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Chain-Link Fence

    I am truly shocked to know that this was a true story. The writing completely captures the feel that you must have felt in this situation (Supposing it was you). ...

    Feb 6, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Thrid Story Window

    A very nice story to go with the Harris Burdick picture. There is fantasic imagery, especially in the beginning, that gives a perfect picture, of...well, the picture. I understand that ...

    Feb 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Like Father, Like Son.

    This is an unusually rare, remarkably sad poem that certainly portrays extreme amounts of emotion. The end dialogue of this poem just splits the reader's heart into two, giving the ...

    Feb 3, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: beginging

    It is magnificently written, if you wanted to know, so I would certainly not worry about that. In a sense, this passage reminds me of the film "Raising Arizona" and ...

    Feb 3, 2011


A person is more than their experiences, stacked up like stones... Our best moments are the foundations we use to reach for the sky.
— Yumi and the Nightmare Painter by Brandon Sanderson